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jen
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hi every body
this is my first subject here
and..it's apoem
i hope u like it
i'm waiting for ur feedback&
(i've waited)
i've waited u to wake
but u've never come
i made abeautiful cake
to share with u some
u left me behind
runing for money
we were side by side
but no longer honey
!!is this ur new life
!!for this u abandoned me
u killed me with a knife
and ur happy as i can see
this isn't over yet
u'll feel the same pain
u started alittle bit
but what coming is the main
i've made up my mind
i won't be alone again
i'll leave u behind
i'll treat u the same
may be u'll know how
u treated me so wrong
i've waited for u to change
but i've waited too long
hi hamsa
very touching I like it so much you have a good style
thank u sooooo much for the sweet words
I have a small notie and I hope you don't mind
not at all
I'm not sure but I feel if you replace came by did it would be better
i've waited u to wake
but u've never come i've never thought of that but it seems very good option
pleaseeeeee don't stop posting I liked what you wrote keep it up sweety
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really thanks is not enough
u'll see other poems for me soon
be ready for them honey
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08-09-08, 05:14 PM
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