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jen 13-09-08 01:13 AM

why...asimple word
 
hi gues
i hope u like this poem too
.....................................

why
why did u late
what took u so long
no,this is not our fate
didn't u consider my love among


why did u do this to me
where 're the beautiful words
why did u've to be so mean
u promised to give me all the worlds


i tried to excuse u
but i couldn't
i count some reasons for u
to help, but it wouldn't


i don't get it
i'm just asking why
it's asimple word
not that high


*******************

soooooooo
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

what do u think
???????????????????


my love
jeeeeeeeen
:flowers2::flowers2::flowers2:

awad200 13-09-08 02:00 AM

beautiful jen

but pleas dont make the next poem sad to

put alittle joy on it

thank u soooooooooooo much

همسه ود 13-09-08 03:33 AM

lovely as always
you know I use to write what we call publishing your hurt lol
when you write about your feeling and it was always sad like your poem now I can tell that it's not only me lol
thanks again for sharing your wonderfull words with us

jen 15-09-08 01:02 AM

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة awad200 (المشاركة 1638462)
beautiful jen
THANKS ALOT AWAD..........I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY

but pleas dont make the next poem sad too

put alittle joy on it
NO TEARS...............NO JOY
BUT I'LL TRY AS HARD AS I CAN
thank u soooooooooooo much

IT'S MY PLEASURE......REALLY

jen 15-09-08 01:04 AM

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة همسه ود (المشاركة 1638562)
lovely as always
you know I use to write what we call publishing your hurt lol
when you write about your feeling and it was always sad like your poem now I can tell that it's not only me lol
thanks again for sharing your wonderfull words with us


DEAR HAMSA..............
WHAT CAN I SAY TO THIS AMAZING SWEAT WORDS
THANKS ALOT HONEY

amer_6630 15-09-08 01:14 AM

jen
ur poems are getting more and more wonderful and it has amazing meanings

thanx a lot and keep it up



freedove 15-09-08 01:16 AM

wow
i liked it truly
it,s so simple and sensible
my greetings for u dear
thanks for it

darla 15-09-08 01:17 AM

SAD POEMS

THANK YOU

jen 15-09-08 09:01 PM

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة amer_6630 (المشاركة 1642242)
jen
ur poems are getting more and more wonderful and it has amazing meanings

thanx a lot and keep it up



i don't know what to say
the words 're running away from me


http://www.liillas.com/up2//uploads/...8dc433bca4.jpg

jen 15-09-08 09:04 PM

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة freedove (المشاركة 1642247)
wow
i liked it truly
it,s so simple and sensible
my greetings for u dear
thanks for it

thanks is yours for the lovely words u wrote
accept my love honey

jen 15-09-08 09:06 PM

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة darla (المشاركة 1642255)
SAD POEMS



THANK YOU

u just made my day
thanks alot

cutegirl123 15-09-08 10:05 PM

:Thanx::Thanx::Thanx:

:flowers2::flowers2::flowers2:

jen 16-09-08 01:18 AM

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة cutegirl123 (المشاركة 1643952)
:Thanx::Thanx::Thanx:

:flowers2::flowers2::flowers2:

hi cutyyyyy
sooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeat
thanks honey


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