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hi every body
this is my first subject here
and..it's apoem
i hope u like it
i'm waiting for ur feedback&

(i've waited)

i've waited u to wake
but u've never come
i made abeautiful cake
to share with u some

u left me behind
runing for money
we were side by side
but no longer honey

!!is this ur new life
!!for this u abandoned me
u killed me with a knife
and ur happy as i can see

this isn't over yet
u'll feel the same pain
u started alittle bit
but what coming is the main

i've made up my mind
i won't be alone again
i'll leave u behind
i'll treat u the same

may be u'll know how
u treated me so wrong
i've waited for u to change
but i've waited too long

very touching I like it so much you have a good style
I have a small notie and I hope you don't mind
I'm not sure but I feel if you replace came by did it would be better

i've waited u to wake
but u've never come

pleaseeeeee don't stop posting I liked what you wrote keep it up sweety

very nice poem
I like it so much dear
may allah bless you
waiting for more

i gave ur topic stars because it deserve it

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة همسه ود (المشاركة 1631449)

very touching I like it so much you have a good style
thank u sooooo much for the sweet words
I have a small notie and I hope you don't mind
not at all
I'm not sure but I feel if you replace came by did it would be better

i've waited u to wake
but u've never come

i've never thought of that but it seems very good option

pleaseeeeee don't stop posting I liked what you wrote keep it up sweety

really thanks is not enough
u'll see other poems for me soon
be ready for them honey

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة amer_6630 (المشاركة 1632360)

i gave ur topic stars because it deserve it

!!!!!!oh my god
amer.... i can't be more thankfulllllllll
thanks alot