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i've waited (poem)1

hi every body
this is my first subject here
and..it's apoem
i hope u like it
i'm waiting for ur feedback&

(i've waited)

i've waited u to wake
but u've never come
i made abeautiful cake
to share with u some

u left me behind
runing for money
we were side by side
but no longer honey

!!is this ur new life
!!for this u abandoned me
u killed me with a knife
and ur happy as i can see

this isn't over yet
u'll feel the same pain
u started alittle bit
but what coming is the main

i've made up my mind
i won't be alone again
i'll leave u behind
i'll treat u the same

may be u'll know how
u treated me so wrong
i've waited for u to change
but i've waited too long

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ENJOY IT
JEN

u want the feed back

ur topic is amazing and i think u should keep it up

thanx for sharing it with us in this section

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة amer_6630 (المشاركة 1630076)

u want the feed back

ur topic is amazing and i think u should keep it up

thanx for sharing it with us in this section

!!!!amer himself
it's my pleasure
thanks alot

I like your poem very much Jen

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ثم كانت الذكري (المشاركة 1630137)

I like your poem very much Jen

thanks zekra
i'm glad u liked it