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’let’s complete the story

Complete the Story

Hi, All

In this subject the main goal is to improve our ways of writing, so the idea is to start with asmall paragraph of an incomplete story then, the person whose turn is next he/she have to complete the story with out putting an end to it in order, to give the next participant a chance to participate in the story. After any Participation, we should try to correct the mistakes that had been made and if I have done any mistakes don’t hesitate in correcting mine. It’s really an effective way to know our minor errors in writing.

مرحبا للكل

في هذا الموضوع الهدف الأساسي هو تحسين طرق الكتابة لدينا, الفكرة هي البداية بفقرة لقصة غير مكتملة وبعدها يتم الزيادة عليها من قبل المشارك الذي يلي دون إنهاء القصة حتى يحصل المشارك التالي على فرصة للمشاركة في هذا الموضوع. بعد كل مشاركة, سأحاول تصحيح الأخطاء ولا تترددوا في تصحيح أخطائي إن وجدت. هذه الطريقة فعالة لتجعلنا على علم بالأخطاء التي لا نلاحظها و نقع فيها أثناء الكتابة.

The Story

Ones upon time, in a great big farm there was a huge house in this house, there was a little family surrounded by love and happiness. The father of this family was named Josef, the mother her name is Sarah, and God blessed them with a very beautiful daughter they’ve named her Hanna.

i hope you like the idea

waiting for new events:lol:

Hanna was a pretty girl, with sweet temper. One day, her mother sent her to the nearby farm to fetch someone to fix the broken lambs in the basement. ll

great idea....i like it

in her way ...hanna has met her friend may..and they kept walking tell the
middle of tha tone,and pay some piskuites to both of them,.

Then May told Hanna a story about her lost dog ( pepo), she was looking for it, and Hanna suggested that maybe the dog is locked inside her home's basement

great idea Zhraa
let's see I'm not very good at making up stories ,but I'll try

May said that she looked carefully all over the house. But she didn't think of the basement. And she said that she's gonna hurry back home to look for the poor little dog.
Hana then continued her way to the farm, where she was going.
But then, she looked back to say something to May. May was already gone, but Hana then stumbled in a stone and fell to the ground