منتديات ليلاس - the creative minds

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- - the creative minds (https://www.liilas.com/vb3/t70108.html)

the creative minds

chapter I
Looking at the fading flame at his little room
saying words of goodbye in his mind for the past life
knowing that this is his last day at this cursed town
he decide to end the life of the candle and not to wait another moment
he smashed the door or what left of it in his way out
went down the stairs
to the lobby .. a lobby? what a joke ... the hotel owner is the example
of how miserable it is!
he gave the keys gave the man the last glimpse
this same man who he saw for the last four years is now a stranger
holding nothing but a note and his jacket he left outside to street corner
to wait for a cab...
smiling of the thought he will be the same as the driver
expect he will drive a lemo and get a better life
he did not expect much... but he knew it offers more than the last decade did
that how the old life felt to jack
the time passed fast with his thoughts and the cab arrived
he snuch in..closed the door with care... where to?
asked the driver..
he gave the note ... looking at the face of a shocked man
are you sure?... this is the place
you know what it is like?
he nodes with a smile...and here the road of new life
starts

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طيب انا ما قرات كثير روايات.. بس خلينا نجرب نكتب هيك قصه صغير.. :)

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Good Choice Labib

You've caught my interest

where he will go ?:rfb04470:

http://www.liilas.com/upload/getimg.php?image=32469

i can kill him hehe
or .. lets see ^_^

Jack you want some coffee
...
thats the first thing he heard
waking up ... he did not know
what wake him up ... but he had an itch to return to his dreams ... on the cab
is it the voice of his new friend
or the smell of coffee
he look through the half open window
on his left ... a human chain in queue
all waiting for some coffee
where is he... he had a feeling
of a dream
... one he never wanna wake from
" you slept for 4 hours drink this coffee and head straight on this road about 1 mile
down the hill
i am not allowed to enter that area "
those words made no sense
yet he felt that this is not one of his old dreams
it is reality ... he is really far away from his old life
...
he took his coffee didnot ask any questions
gave the last of his money
and like a mad man who discovered his best side
he nicely closed the vip alike door
he reached half the way ... he tried to understand his surroundings
he is now on the top of the hill
behind him he still could see a small light
from the strange coffee house
.
suddenly
... he heard a far calling from ahead
everything else was a blank
...
yet again he wake up
on strange voice ...
Jen you know you should not use your ability on people like that ...
i was just going to save you the trouble of getting me another Nanny
he is no Nanny ... just the person who will drive our limo for few months ...
give me a week ... said Jen to her father with a smile
the two noticed jack staring at the scene..
we are just the last survivals of old clan
who happen to have some cool magic abilities
we live in castle with intellect of a high modern folks
yet wait for a day of clash with other stupid folks who happen to be waiting to try kidnap me in the next Eclipse
... this should explain some things for now
Jen could not stop laughing and left the room
she just a spoiled kid dont mind
you can call me Tim
we know who you are from the note
you should not drink a coffee with out knowing the side effects ... specially if it is from a middle of nowhere
...
jack just remembered one of the things he hated the most
beside candles and stupid strange black outs
...puzzles

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i am not even gonna look for mistakes now :)
i will stop.. maybe continue this in my own site blog or what ever
this was only a try to bring something out from my english ...