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لبيب 09-02-08 09:44 PM

Thoughts
 
to conquer a nation
you need an army
to conquer a heart
i wonder what you need?
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a figure in dark
appears to my eyes
in a rainy day
alone under the rain
i was holding the umbrella
i am looking at the rain
trying to feel the air
how strong how cold
i step close steps
enough to see a person
a girl i see
but still a stranger
stranger to me
i will hold the umbrella
we can share it
on the way
you dont live far way
do you?
she nodes
no voice
or it is me
who cant hear her words
i think it is the cold
a beauty
in the cold
under the rain
this is no fair
so we walk
trying to keep the steps
close enough
so we stay
under the umbrella
the rain stops
i close the umbrella
separate or ways
are now
i say goodbye
she nodes again
leaving
Thoughts
one that left
with her steps
will i see her
again?

Metvirus 10-02-08 10:34 AM

thats was really nice
thanks Mr

funny_angel 10-02-08 07:54 PM

W(^o^)W


thats really gooooooooood

(^_^)

thank you sooooooooo much
(^_^)

وردة من الماس 10-02-08 10:31 PM

wooooooooooooooooow
thats great
I love suspence and mystery
ha ha ha ha
about the first one I think the answer is a look , a good smile and the most important thing is nice words

thank you

لبيب 12-02-08 01:20 AM

thank you all for passing
funny angel
metvirus
وردة من الماس
..
:)

SIMOOON 12-02-08 01:24 AM

its really great
i like the way in which the feelings are expressed
thanks alot you labib

Bugs Bunny 12-02-08 10:47 AM

oh my god
i must run and tell me girlfriend some lovely words
i might get more affection

tnx dude

dragonguard 13-02-08 10:26 AM

for your first Q the answer is :just tell her that you love her and let her feel it not only hear it

I love walking under the rain but i wish the poem ended by inviting to a beautiful cup of coffee to leave some hope

لبيب 13-02-08 09:57 PM

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة dragonguard (المشاركة 1220237)
for your first Q the answer is :just tell her that you love her and let her feel it not only hear it

I love walking under the rain but i wish the poem ended by inviting to a beautiful cup of coffee to leave some hope

in the next time hmmm i think i might left some hope
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bugs bunny ... yeah sure :)


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