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saro0 30-03-07 06:49 PM

i need you
 
hi everyone

this is the first time for me to put something i wrote here

plz tell me what you think :lWR04888:

here goes:

Sometimes I feel that I wanna be alone


In a planet away… away from everyone
just to be with you...

I just wanna be with you baby…

I want to be for you forever…

I need you baby..

Where are you???

Why can’t you see this pain in me??

Why are you taking so long to come to me??

I need you… I need you baby

You.. just you.. and no body else

Plz answer my calls and come to me…

mesho 30-03-07 09:11 PM

WoooW

its grate you did not tell me befor abaut it

But really i like it so much no i love it

it is so sadness wherever it nice

and i wanna say cogradgulaion for this amaizing wraiting :)

شهووده 03-04-07 04:34 AM

I need you… I need you baby

You.. just you.. and no body else


والله رهيبه يا قمر

فعلا رائعه

والله عندك موهبه بالكتابه الانجليزيه ..

بتعرفي

انا ماا بعرف اكتب خواطري بالانجليزي .. مابعرف ليش ههههههههههههههه

لان بعد ما بنزل خاطرتي بحس حالي ضعيفه .. خخخخ

بس
والله رهيبه خاطرتك حبيبتي

لا تحرمينا من كتاباتك

اختك

eminemlady

saro0 03-04-07 06:07 PM

thanx dear

you know i used to be just like u

but that day i was in the mood of writing something and sharing it

thanx for the complement

and thanx for cheering me up

saro0 05-04-07 05:10 AM

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة mesho (المشاركة 730720)
WoooW
its grate you did not tell me befor abaut it
But really i like it so much no i love it
it is so sadness wherever it nice
and i wanna say cogradgulaion for this amaizing wraiting :)


thanx sis

well not every single detail in my life you will now

loooo000ooooo000ooool

just kidden

i didn't tell well coz i wrote it and post down right away


again thanx sis and i'm glad that you liked it

funny_angel 15-04-07 06:50 PM

Sometimes I feel that I wanna be alone


In a planet away… away from everyone

cool i love it
W(^o^)W
v. nice

saro0 16-04-07 01:17 AM

FUNNY ANGEL

thanx

freedove 16-04-07 03:02 PM

without u my world is so empty
i lose every thing and feel so tiny
u erase my pain and make me happy
for that i love u do u believe honey

ur words r cute and lovely my friend wish u the best

saro0 17-04-07 06:01 AM

hi dear

i'm glad that u liked it

so is ur writing it's really great


thanx

سوار العسل 24-04-07 09:22 AM

Wonderful talent and very beautiful words thankfully Honey

saro0 24-04-07 06:25 PM

NO SWIETY THAK YOU...

AND PLS ALWAYS be IN MY TOPICS

THANX

lolo cat 03-05-07 08:58 PM

you are fantastic keep writting
your notes are so lovely

saro0 05-05-07 02:23 AM

wow thnk you lolo cat

you make me blush i swear...

thanx darl

MiSs nonnah 07-05-07 05:46 PM

niccccce words
i appreciate it
waiting 4 more of your good words

saro0 07-05-07 06:21 PM

thanx cute girl

I appreciate your wonderfull words

you all give alot of hope

oo in shaa allah

the next time i write somrthing new i will post it here

thanx alot for your appearnce daling

little angel 09-05-07 12:10 PM

it's so sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet ... keep going on .....;)

saro0 09-05-07 08:52 PM

thanx little angle


really u make me blush


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