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لبيب	26-03-07 01:48 AM

lunar moon-هاي قصيدتي انا

from all the days...
this day
from all the nights
the night of clear sky...
a night of the lunar moon
walking by the shore
i look down at the sand
grasp it with my hand
the day, the night, the sea..
and the sand i hold
all know what i feel
soar of lost love...
that same hand
to hold the sand
pass it to you..
that sand belongs
to the sea,as
i belong to you

a remaining memory
of my love for you.

هاي قصيدتي انا ومن كلماتي لفتاة احلامي
شو هو Bugs bunny زود
هههه
مش قصيده .. مجرد خاطره.. مجرد كلمات..
ههه... بس ما تعدو اخطاء...ههه حتى غلطت بكلمة قصيده

شهووده

26-03-07 09:19 PM

بس والله اخي كثير كثير حلوه

يارب ما تحرمنا من قصائدك ونشوفك دايما معانا

منور

Eminemlady

saro0

27-03-07 01:23 AM

WOOOOOW

YOU NOW YOU ARE REALLY GOOD MA SHAA ALLAH

VERY NICE

HOPE TO SEA MORE FROM YOU

THANX

freedove

16-04-07 03:30 PM

really so romantic has that taste we all once felt
good friend waiting always for ur great works

سوار العسل

24-04-07 09:25 AM

really Wonderful words not deprive us of Abdaatck

pink dreamz

24-04-07 01:05 PM

nice words
go a head labeb

الجوهرة

02-05-07 02:17 AM

very nice

keep going hope to see more from u

lolo cat

03-05-07 08:54 PM

it is abeautiful meaning
you express very well
your english is very good
i wish you continu just to learn from you

لبيب	09-05-07 10:45 PM

thank you all for the great comments ^_^ ...

yasso

08-06-07 05:35 PM

it's great
i want to see more than this

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