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لوشة العزاوي

16-06-12 08:23 PM

Fifth poem love بقلم زهرة سوداء

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته

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القصيدة الخامسة هي

Love

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وسوف يكون تقييمكم على جمالية القصيدة من اسلوبها ولغتها

ويكون من 10 درجات

وشكراااا

katia.q

16-06-12 08:53 PM

مبرووووووك بداية المسابقة
وبالتوفيق لجميع المشتركين

Ellie

17-06-12 12:28 AM

it really nice
i loved th subject alot byt it is way too short
my evaluation
7

لهفة اللقاء

17-06-12 06:58 PM

6.5

good luck....:)

lala905

18-06-12 09:14 AM

Although it is short yet it is up to english poems
I liked her sentences , clear and dreamy. I rate her 7/10

عهد Amsdsei

18-06-12 12:59 PM

good luck everybody

^____________^

Rehana

18-06-12 01:15 PM

Avatar wonderful poem is too short .. Good luck

7

وردة دجلة

18-06-12 01:45 PM

salam 3laekm

Short but nice and simple

I like it

i give it 7

Thanks

THE GHOST 92

18-06-12 05:50 PM

very simple
nice confidence in writing
10/10

إحسآس الورد

18-06-12 06:15 PM

بدااية موفقة ^^
بالتوفيق للجميع :)

waxengirl

19-06-12 02:47 AM

Poem with simple and soft words >> i like it

Thank you

Evaluation 8 \ 10

Q.miiro

19-06-12 01:13 PM

salam 3laekm

good luck everybody

10/ i give it ...10

Thank you

هـيـسـوكـا

19-06-12 02:45 PM

بالتوفيق لــــ الجميع المشاركين

حسن الخلق

19-06-12 10:03 PM

السلام عليكم و رحمة الله

Nice poem
The idea of expressive
Style is easy and beautiful
I like it and give her 8
Best wishes

The Golden Heart

20-06-12 07:01 PM

HOPE, we need it in every moment

Evaluation:7/10

good luck for all

عهد Amsdsei

24-06-12 01:11 PM

very good poem

it's short but this kind of poetry will be in the length of Title so

don't wory

good choice for a subject ... and poetry devices

good luck

katia.q

25-06-12 12:38 AM

Hi
this is really sweet and nice poem but how short can a poem be??
I mean I was just beginning to enjoy it and then BAM
the end
the subject is great ,the meaning and the visualizations
are good
I think it had real potential to be great but you end it too soon
I wish you all the luck in the world

إحسآس الورد

25-06-12 04:48 PM

hello
the poem is very short
but I liked it

the title is not good
it is not appropriate

I really like your expressions

the subject is good

good luck ^^

لوشة العزاوي

28-06-12 11:53 AM

Hello

A very beautiful poem

Style of language is beautiful and harmonious

This strange and beautiful

Success of the rider always

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