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The second poem short season بقلم park hae in
السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته
http://www.liilas.com/up/uploads/liilas_13398694591.gif نبدء مسابقتنا بالقصيدة الثانية وهي short season http://www.liilas.com/up/uploads/liilas_13398689852.jpg وسوف يكون تقييمكم على جمالية القصيدة من اسلوبها ولغتها ويكون من 10 درجات وشكراااا |
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أتمني كل التوفيق للمشتركين |
amaaaaaaaaaaazing
my evaluation is 10 its subject is just too good |
excellent
I like it soooooo much the topic is perfect I give it 9.5 good luck everybody.....:) |
Short season comes out to be childhood> good subject for your poem.
There are words in the poem you should have cancelled to be perfect ex. let me rephrase it for you and compair Enchanted place where colors are brighter Morning more fragrant and air softer It's magic in life When the world seems fair And no meaning for despair It's magic in life Where life is rainbow and sky glow Colors are brighter and air softer Carry it with you You'll never be old Short season in life is childhood rate 8/10 |
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