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i've waited (poem)1

hi every body
this is my first subject here
and..it's apoem
i hope u like it
i'm waiting for ur feedback&

(i've waited)

i've waited u to wake
but u've never come
i made abeautiful cake
to share with u some

u left me behind
runing for money
we were side by side
but no longer honey

!!is this ur new life
!!for this u abandoned me
u killed me with a knife
and ur happy as i can see

this isn't over yet
u'll feel the same pain
u started alittle bit
but what coming is the main

i've made up my mind
i won't be alone again
i'll leave u behind
i'll treat u the same

may be u'll know how
u treated me so wrong
i've waited for u to change
but i've waited too long

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ENJOY IT
JEN

u want the feed back

ur topic is amazing and i think u should keep it up

thanx for sharing it with us in this section

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة amer_6630 (المشاركة 1630076)

u want the feed back

ur topic is amazing and i think u should keep it up

thanx for sharing it with us in this section

!!!!amer himself
it's my pleasure
thanks alot

I like your poem very much Jen

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ثم كانت الذكري (المشاركة 1630137)

I like your poem very much Jen

thanks zekra
i'm glad u liked it

very touching I like it so much you have a good style
I have a small notie and I hope you don't mind
I'm not sure but I feel if you replace came by did it would be better

i've waited u to wake
but u've never come

pleaseeeeee don't stop posting I liked what you wrote keep it up sweety

very nice poem
I like it so much dear
may allah bless you
waiting for more

i gave ur topic stars because it deserve it

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة همسه ود (المشاركة 1631449)

very touching I like it so much you have a good style
thank u sooooo much for the sweet words
I have a small notie and I hope you don't mind
not at all
I'm not sure but I feel if you replace came by did it would be better

i've waited u to wake
but u've never come

i've never thought of that but it seems very good option

pleaseeeeee don't stop posting I liked what you wrote keep it up sweety

really thanks is not enough
u'll see other poems for me soon
be ready for them honey

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة amer_6630 (المشاركة 1632360)

i gave ur topic stars because it deserve it

!!!!!!oh my god
amer.... i can't be more thankfulllllllll
thanks alot

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة SIMOOON (المشاركة 1631769)

very nice poem
I like it so much dear
may allah bless you
waiting for more

dear simooon
i'm very honoured with ur sweat words
wait for more soon

its very very beautiful jen and

full with a lot of feeling

keep writing jen u have a very good way

ohhhh awad !!!! u came here too
thank u sooooooo much
for the nice words