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عهد Amsdsei 24-06-12 01:11 PM

very good poem

it's short but this kind of poetry will be in the length of Title so

don't wory

good choice for a subject ... and poetry devices

good luck

katia.q 25-06-12 12:38 AM

Hi
this is really sweet and nice poem but how short can a poem be??
I mean I was just beginning to enjoy it and then BAM
the end
the subject is great ,the meaning and the visualizations
are good
I think it had real potential to be great but you end it too soon
I wish you all the luck in the world

إحسآس الورد 25-06-12 04:48 PM

hello
the poem is very short
but I liked it

the title is not good
it is not appropriate

I really like your expressions

the subject is good

good luck ^^

لوشة العزاوي 28-06-12 11:53 AM

Hello

A very beautiful poem

Style of language is beautiful and harmonious

This strange and beautiful

Success of the rider always


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